poetry

Hi today the is my poetry i did and this is mine

On a special day the Kea team went on a trip to go see the Auckland rugby.

 First of all we had a little snack before we went. When the bus came to pick us up we all hoped in the bus 

and Mr said are we all here and we all said yes and we drove away. And went we got there we jumed of the but and we started walking a across the road. After we did that we walked in to a big building we all seen golden shiny wallpaper and we where going up the escalator. After we when up the escalator we all said wow because we where really high and we also saw people from all balck.

Next we all got a bracelet with a x on it to scan in to the games.After we got a bracelet we got who worked there she said can every body come over here and make to lines for me